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Revolution

I want to spark a movement, not just any movement, but I want a revolution because we lack the knowledge and power we have, but we strip that power from ourselves. I wanna change the world because we're living in a time where we pop pills for thrills, where boys and girls cut themselves in depression just to feel and the love we call real is Netflix and chill. I want us to have a revelation because we’re the world's leaders and it’s not hard because we live in a time of emancipation and here’s my proclamation for this nation. World leaders classes of 2015 to 2019 it’s time for us to start fighting for change if the world falls out only we’re to blame. I want change, but how can we without numbers, just grab hands and hit this world faster than lightning and harder than thunder. Too many of us 13 to 20 think about going to college for our mothers and fathers but comes along a blunder and we end up 6 feet under. I want spark a movement, no, a revolution and together we can stand and together we could fall, but we won’t stop till we take care of it at the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 2:14:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Zephania. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:36:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:34:00 PM
Zephaniah, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:33:00 PM
Zephaniah Lang-Davila, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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