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Revolution

When the air that we breathe becomes air we choke, and the fires burn and consume all of our hope, in the tears of anguish a nation will soak, no longer could we the people hear the pope. The skies will burn an angry crimson and the corrupt will pay their dues, pay for their crimes of atrocity and treason with their lives as the revolution ensues. But sometime in the future new problems will arise with more people oppressed in all new ways, cutting people down to their appropriate size, all the way to the end of man's days. In the cycle of humanity all will end in blood, one day welling up in a world ending flood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/19/2015 10:23:00 AM
Jonathan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:11:00 AM
this is deep Jonathan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2015 10:40:00 PM
Wow...one of the best poems I've ever read.. Nicely done
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Jonathan Siegel
Date: 5/18/2015 10:44:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words Justin, I hope to post more poetry here :)

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