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Revolution

A myriad of steps we will take to correct our predecessors’ mistakes... So busy will we be our own foibles we’ll not see

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Date: 5/2/2024 5:07:00 AM
so true...until they become glaring and grow a bit larger... There is something about a few well measured and rhymed lines that makes truth humorous but visible.
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Date: 5/1/2024 2:50:00 PM
we're blind to our own faults to correcting them...well, probably won't happen :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 5/1/2024 6:04:00 PM
That's a pretty safe bet, especially for me.
Date: 5/1/2024 8:38:00 AM
Too busy looking over our shoulder lol. Tom
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Date: 5/1/2024 10:54:00 AM
There you go. You are right. Over each shoulder, I think...
Date: 5/1/2024 6:39:00 AM
I had a foible once....very headstrong and hard to house break....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/1/2024 10:54:00 AM
So you had a foible. How did you overcome it?...

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