Revival

spring rain today how green my memories- ah,I live again

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/21/2010 5:07:00 AM

Well Brian I have asked every poet sponsoring a contest right now.. are all your entries intact? as all mine have disappeared and so have Deb Guzzi's... I cannot read the "unread poems" to grade them ..and the "edit" feature is not working... I am aware that the upgrades are happening now but it has completely invalidated my contest the way I am looking at it ... what do u think I should do??? Management has assured all of us they will "fix" this but it seems tainted now... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/20/2010 3:57:00 PM

Youve been turning out some spectacular poems lately..well I guess you always do, but I love this one. I always favor the short poems..and you are a master of that form. BG

Rick Parise

Date: 4/20/2010 8:42:00 AM

I Enjoyed~~~Rain for the soul~~~If you need anymore come on over to Oregon!! Rick~~~Salem,Or

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2010 7:00:00 AM

I enjoyed the haiku. I like " spring rain..."

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 5:14:00 AM

Spring and rain and memories do that to a person .. feel alive and full of life... thankxxx for my HM in your recent contest ..it was a pleasure writing Pisa's "Perfection" and appreciate the honor with so many brilliant entries ... and now I see the word I run from "SONNET" as your next contest... oh my ... I guess now I will have to hone my poetic skills and surprise the sponsor... I accept your challenge... haha...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/20/2010 4:03:00 AM

very appropriate!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2010 3:47:00 AM

Glad that you are revived...Keep the creative pen flowing...Would you look at my poem "The Unfinished Work" and tell me if you get anything from reading it and should I change it...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2010 3:18:00 AM

Nicely put, have a nice day..P.D.