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Below is the poem entitled Reveries which was written by poet Dylan Irvin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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This night,
You whisper for me in the midst
Though you shed the light of the moon
It is dark in the black waterfall
That you haunt…

That night,
You stood atop the waterfall, naked feet bathing
Fatal tears streaming down your cheeks
The liquid moon calling for your soul
So you jumped

This night,
Your mystic eyes glisten in the twilight
And here tonight, shrouded in the forest
You pull the rhythm from the chorus
Drowning music entirely from your bleeding ears

That night,
Shards of liquid daggers cut through your lungs
Something pulled you from consciousness
And you sank into a cold death
Upon the black water lake

This morning,
Once again within shadows
I lay, broken and breathless
In the mists of a purple morning sky
Poisoned by the nectar of your once blooming love…

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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:23:00 AM
    another sad one. Apparently, you have seen so much in your too few days ( you are so young.) Love will come again, make sure she's not a user. :) love and hugs, Catie :)

    Irvin Avatar Dylan Irvin
    Date: 3/26/2013 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Catie, I appreciate that. Yeah I've been through a lot and done a lot of things I regret. But I'm a lot better now! :)
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey
    Date: 3/26/2013 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    In my youth, I was a user too. If you need someone to talk too, I'm here, and I have strength to spare. hugs, Catie :)