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R Words Contest sponsored by Constance La France

August 3, 2023

"Reveries are gifts of moments, even melancholy ones, when our hearts were happy." ~ by poet We planted a flower garden, he and I Throughout spring's sunny weather Shared our hopes among heliotropes We did everything together My reveries linger of when my finger wore a ring that he had given My life is marred and I'm scarred By the thorn love used to scathe me We grew roses in nurtured beds, he and I Throughout summer's warm weather Relished each bloom and its perfume We did everything together My reveries are treasured memories But the summer days have ended We live apart and it wounds my heart For the thorn's still causing harm We shared wine when we dined, he and I Throughout autumn's chilled weather Drinking Cabernet, he vowed to stay We did everything together My reveries at sunset fill me with regret Gone are those days of fall, one and all Chilly winds blow, and soon it will snow The thorn still pricks my skin We played in the snow like children, he and I Throughout winter's frigid weather. We walked in the moonlight every night We did everything together Until we said goodbye, and now I cry In sadness I weep; without him I can't sleep My reveries remain, and with them the pain Of a sharp thorn in my side We loved each other, he and I Throughout four seasons of weather Days of dancing, nights of romancing We did everything together. Reveries of us I can't forget, and yet I wish I didn't remember that December When it all ended and I pretended Not to feel the thorn that pierced my heart

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Date: 8/3/2023 3:03:00 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2023 1:22:00 PM
WOW!!! A wonderful write/quote. Red rose picture, so true. I enjoyed it. "Good Luck" I put my "R" in. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/3/2023 9:11:00 AM
It reflects joys and pain of human life. Beautifully penned. You are a gifted poet.
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Date: 8/3/2023 9:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for the encouraging compliments you offer, Jay.
Date: 8/3/2023 6:49:00 AM
Wow! This is raw pain, Lin and hauntingly beautiful:) going to my faves:)
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Date: 8/3/2023 7:04:00 AM
G'morning and thank you, Jo. I had no idea what "R" word I'd choose to write about until I had a reverie this morning. Not one as sad as this, but it led me to write about them. I'm delighted you found it worthy of being faved. Thank you.

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