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Revenge Is Sweet

I can't describe the way i feel; my goodness is this for real? Have you seen what I've just done? please! oh please! don't tell no-one. It started when i hit the ground, my head was spinning round and round. I saw his shadow in the light, and "boom" i went like dynamite. I ran and ran as fast as i can. Towards the strange, unsightly man. He didn't move, he stood there strong. As if in shock of, what's going on. A fatal blow, a mighty kick. To look at him, it made me sick!! For what he did i'm sure he'll pay!! For taking part of my life away!! Hurt him i will, may cause a crime. But in the long run, It's worth the time. "Lost loved ones when it was someone else who took them from you?" " Don't embark in violence and don't suffer in silence!!"

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Date: 10/7/2009 12:21:00 PM
Kool poem Kirsty, sometimes revenge can be sweet >> James
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