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Revelation's Optical Illusion

Quintessentially phantasmagoric, her cobalt skies' chimerical fancy whores itself out for poetry, sumptuously cached 'tween a revelation's optical illusion enchanting white knights and seducing dragons alike, her flimflam elusively lofty & difficult to evermore be captured amidst celestial spheres of rapture

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/2/2016 10:22:00 PM

...and what are we if not whores in the employ of madame reaper dying surreptitiously to self as we buy, sell, and trade one another determining a market value we call fair while laughing at the lie with our tears. Sorry, that fell outta my files — your words are much more amazing, amusing and awsomaniacal. I like peekin' in your PO closet:-) cheerupkas and chitlins! ~ j

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/12/2016 4:41:00 AM

An optical illusion indeed LOL! Good job here Paloma! MC

Robert Warlov

Date: 10/9/2016 6:57:00 PM

I've always found dragons to be enchanting. It's the seductive white knights that spell trouble. - Easily the most chimerical definition for "BS" I've ever seen. ;~)

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/7/2016 8:48:00 AM

I suppose I'm a rather cheap whore, when it comes to poetry. Nicely penned, Paloma! Left me smiling:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 9:08:00 AM

Oh God, I actually did laugh out loud, left me smirking. :) Thanks for lifting my day!

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/7/2016 7:12:00 AM

Delightful, talented write! So rapturous! And if one is to whore, for most of do in one form or another, just some more honest than others--what better reason than glorious poetry?!

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 8:04:00 AM

It is quite glorious, isn't it? I so appreciate your sentiment, thank you Joe!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2016 5:51:00 AM

Yes, yes, well expressed. ;) she seems to capture the moment. Linda

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 8:03:00 AM

Hopefully, thanks Linda. ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/6/2016 11:56:00 PM

This is quite well written! Bravo.

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 8:02:00 AM

Thank you so much!