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Revelation

Like a rose by autumn broken, losing charm of wound in the frost, so with a tear in me your heart -my heart hurts. And I'm not care not color nor bird, no feel sorry for this tiny drass, in each image and star I found see a shadow of your trail not once, captured by the visual fraud, fly like free butterfly in your sections and search and call, but you're not your are not a bird nor a blade,you are just a piece of my heart and breath.... /"REVELATION" -Natalia Georgieva/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 10:14:00 AM
Tanks for the repy mr.Freemen! It is an honor... But is not is beter as an idea,these honorable place to be evidenced by documents... Sincerely N.Georgieva
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:01:00 AM
I place you as an honorable mention, Georgieva. Thanks for honoring my Contest with your entry. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:15:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful piece of writing:)))
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:24:00 AM
Hello Natalig, This is so beautiful, what precious words you have penned here. Congratulations for this lovely Poem. As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Nataliq sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:27:00 PM
Hey Nataliq! Congratulations on your Honorable Mention Placement in John's contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congrats Natalig on your fantastic HM in John's contest with this fabulous entry ... enjoy your special honor tonight with luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:56:00 PM
I loved your revelation, Nataliq. Congratulations on your success in my contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win inn the contest, Nataliq
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:03:00 PM
A good ensemble of words in this composition.
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Date: 1/8/2011 9:23:00 AM
Smile ~ First I wish to sincerely say that, "I Love 'Your Beautiful Name' My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Natalia Georgieva!!!'" ~ Second, upon the rereading of this extremely soulful painting of "A Beautiful Canvas" I can say, not only is it very movingly lovely but, "Keep Brushing, From That Trove of 'Your Beautiful Soul!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day & New Year, My Dear;" Bye!:) ~
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