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When dark clouds collide and thunder erupts in shaken stares, rains fall on unrelenting sorrows along bramble thorn threads, screaming leaves crash into a frozen ground of broken branches and disgraced smiles . . . as cardboard condos dot the litter strewn landscape and graffiti drips in tobacco stained puddles at the feet of those standing in an endless line for bits and scraps of the life they once knew . . . while sons and daughters face the monsters drugged by beliefs conjured on sand blasted battlefields and bibles of their own deciphering, bridging the elongated gaps between lies and promises by those disguised in designer pantsuits with fingers crossed behind their backs . . . and children have secrets thrust upon them through filthy fingernails hiding under bed frames of rusted iron and disgusting touches, silenced by the horror of squeaking hinges and foot steps in the hall, crying for mothers who don’t believe . . . the tears of a poet will be revealed, bleeding through the page

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/22/2016 11:05:00 PM
Your deep appreciation and empathy for others shines through in this brilliant piece Chris! Outstanding! 7 ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie for your kind comment. I truly appreciate your visit to my poem today.
Date: 11/14/2016 6:02:00 PM
Very gritty and explosively truthful poem, Chris. I know that you stated you don't normally write "dark" themed poems, I get it. You're an upbeat kinda poet. But this displays the breadth of humanity in your pen. Light must shine on the darkness, to reveal the twisted face of some existing ugly realities. Job well done, my friend. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. Sorry for the late reply, I don't know how I missed this wonderful comment. I appreciate your coming by to read one of my dark pieces, and though I normally don't express dark sides, I know they exists and it is always a painful thought. Thank you again Freddie
Date: 11/14/2016 1:06:00 PM
Its sad when children have secret pain..whatever caused it..and cant open up to their parents.Its sad when all there seems to be left of life is bits and scraps.Its sad...when one pain steals the beauty of seeing the joy of life..but darkness is not forever...Very deep and dark Chris.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/14/2016 1:26:00 PM
We are all sad at times...even if We are the most optimistic jolly bubbly people on earth...Because We.are human..and can feel... and yes darkness seems forever sometimes....But it is not...and we should keep searching for happiness to be found.again..It would ...eventually it will.yes..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, it is very sad and like I told Dee below, I smile a lot, I am usually very happy but I never forget that there is still sadness in the world no matter how happy I may be. I appreciate you coming by to read this dark one and leaving such a nice comment. And true, darkness is not forever, it just feels that way sometimes.
Date: 11/14/2016 12:26:00 PM
Wow very deep Chris. Well written to bring the reader there.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. This is a little darker than usual for me, I am happy you liked it.

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