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Revay's Love Song

I know I need to keep living while I wait for you to come home But I don't know how to tell my heart to stop hurting since you're the reason it keeps beating on My days are empty, my eyes full of tears but the sound of your voice and the promise of your smile make it all disappear You're the other half of my soul the light that shows me the way You're my yesterday and my tomorrow The Angel that keeps me safe... **** (This was my first poem, that I wrote for my friend / author Sloane Kennedy - as a love song from Revay to her husband Hawke (mc's from her book) - It's part of her book Retribution) May/2016

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Date: 2/4/2017 8:47:00 AM
A poet in the making...great work Claudia...god bless...^WW^
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/4/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, WW, I'm trying to learn my way into poetry! Hugs :)
Date: 12/12/2016 11:51:00 AM
Ah! I always wanted to ask you about this poem, I haven't read Sloane'so book. It's wonderful, thank you <3
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/12/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thank you! I loved so much when she liked it and actually used it on her book :)

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