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Returning

Long journey ended, so weary that I can barely stand, Before a place of such beauty, so long taken for granted, I know better now, such comforts I have missed, I am home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/6/2009 11:38:00 AM
yes, no place like home Auntie Em. Light & Love
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:49:00 AM
I enjoyed this; I like the sense of rootedness that home brings that you've expressed here. The Sijo is a difficult form, the last line is a little short, but it still works. Thanks.
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