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ingesting poison from an open wound lethargic rambles in another dimension death is not the end its merely and ending hopeless and serene the paths converge words tumble out of slashed mouths fingertips burn into the synapses i return to poetry with a stream of conscience pyramids destroyed by ravaged boundaries.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 8:23:00 AM
Powerful poem leaving the reader with much to ponder. Good strong verbs to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:09:00 AM
Awesome , I'm a fan of stream of consciousness writing. It's like tapping into a hidden dimension from a dream and just running with it, no matter how bizarre and abnormal the imagery may be. thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:22:00 AM
Lots of depth Daniel in your lines so beautifully worded.. luv your last two lines especially ...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/11/2010 10:25:00 PM
Deep poem Daniel..indeed deep..excellent--Charma
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