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Return To a Harbor Town

My ship docks in this harbor town again. I haven’t been here since God knows when. I want to get a drink at this public house place. There’s a girl named Brandy there with a beautiful face. Oh Brandy, what a good wife she would be. However, the first love of my life is the sea. On another voyage, I had to go away. I promised I would return to her someday. Brandy is such a woman so fine. She works at the pub serving whiskey and wine. To any man who sees her, she lights his fire. A wonderful woman like her would be any man’s desire. The barkeep told me Brandy no longer works here. “Remember the silver locket? Brandy held it quite dear. She loved you very much, but she could not wait. We are approaching her second wedding anniversary date.” That was saddening news the man told me. However, now that she’s married, I hope she’ll be happy. Based on the 1972 hit song “Brandy (You’re a Fine Girl)” by the Looking Glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/22/2012 10:05:00 PM
WEll, I am glad you gave credit to that song. I was thinking, "hmmm, I know this one." I like how you gave it your own little ending. I just LOVE this song you emulated.
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:33:00 AM
I love the story told here. I always liked that song but felt bad for the bar maid. Glad you brought a happy ending to this tale. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:19:00 PM
I am Robert right now...lol.. changed my contest theme... always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/21/2012 9:51:00 PM
Robert, glad you still desire the happiness in one.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/21/2012 9:37:00 PM
Hi Robert! I enjoyed your story/poem. Gave me an "awww" moment, but I am glad he is happy for her:)
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Date: 1/21/2012 7:13:00 PM
This poem flowed so very well Robert! I enjoyed this write immensely! You formatted this poem very well! I like how you put it together based on that song Brandy! Great song to choose! Awesome Work!!
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