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Return of She

Broken pieces of glasses moves around the high-way while water flows away, Lights were drizzling over the road - nearby woods were mangrove and someone, someone was crying between the hearts I saw, her shadow Standing still scared Over the walking sands Somehow, Somewhere She is .... The Wind The Blood The Glass Bounces and flies A floating glass runs way ! Returns the long trail

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 11/20/2008 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Maryam !!
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Date: 11/20/2008 9:08:00 AM
Ive just joined this site but your poetry is amazing I really like the way the rhythm goes, you deserve that spot out there. good work keep it up.
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 2:48:00 PM
Much to think about here. The last line gives this poem a strong end. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:40:00 PM
Well done, Javed. An excellent poem and form! ~ Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/17/2008 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations Javed on "Reurn of She" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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