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Retribution

As it nestles into her mind, Like a untold secret, She trembles. As if all the hope and faith She once had Is slowly turning its back on her. Fear and anxiety controls her instincts She panics, In an instant, she feels altered, changed, divergent... inhuman. Like fuel, Her heart ignites the fire that torments her soul. She’s furious Her wrath, so potent, so lethal Will eradicate those in her way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/25/2015 7:32:00 PM
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