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Dance knows no borders – it brings people together regardless of religion, nationality, sexuality and political persuasion
- Sergei Polunin


 

Throw me high, higher still Let me breathe again, Let me gain height, I will Live, smile, laugh, be filled With heartbeats steady and wild Let me move, relevé lent (1) Let me stand Hold my hand As if I were a child Be my supporting leg (2) Be my heart when it fails Beat it for me, it's too frail Throw me high, I beg Pirouette me like a sail Dancing in the wind Retire (3) when I retire Be me, be my ire Be my eyes when I am blind Be my anger while I am kind Sit with me, this music Kneel by me, don't mourn For I felt airborne For one second, one tick Alive, in your arms reborn *** September 30, 2017 Copyright © Darren White (1) Relevé lent is a classical ballet term meaning “slow raising.” It is usually used in the Russian Schools of ballet. It describes when a dancer starts in one of the basic ballet positions of the feet with straight legs, then lifts one leg off the floor while raising up to relevé on the supporting leg. (2) Supporting leg is a classical ballet term that describes a dancer’s leg that is supporting their whole body while the other leg is free to do another step. A dancer’s supporting leg is often called a “standing leg.” (3) Retire is the position in which a ballet dancer raises their thigh with the knee bent so that the pointed foot is placed either in front, behind or to the side of the supporting foot.

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Date: 10/3/2017 8:55:00 AM
This is a beautiful write Darren...well penned
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Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:41:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, much appreciated :)
Date: 10/1/2017 11:38:00 PM
I am at a loss for words................. and you know amazing poem!!
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Darren White
Date: 10/2/2017 12:21:00 AM
Thanks my friend, dancing is still my No.1 love :)
Date: 10/1/2017 12:48:00 PM
Once again I watch and read to see the body made of words leap for the air, leap from the page and hold each other suspended between heaven and earth.
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Darren White
Date: 10/1/2017 12:51:00 PM
I love it how you come back to poems for a second read <3
Date: 10/1/2017 7:34:00 AM
Your poem dances, it is so alive, a beautiful poem <3
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Darren White
Date: 10/1/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks my friend :)
Date: 10/1/2017 6:25:00 AM
I just had to say I have been energized with this entry. Thank you for that.
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Darren White
Date: 10/1/2017 6:36:00 AM
You make me smile :)
Date: 10/1/2017 6:23:00 AM
Good Afternoon Darren - Allow me to say this entry needs no footnotes. Let me repeat that once again. This entry needs no footnotes. The emotive factor is off the charts with expression and feeling. Yes it is. This entry in format alone is Free Verse at its finest and best. Yes it is. I consider myself to be a better reader than writer however I know poetry when I see it and feel it. Congratulations on a top level entry in every way. May today be a good day. Excellent....
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Darren White
Date: 10/1/2017 6:36:00 AM
Hi my friend :) Thank you so much! I am honored.
Date: 10/1/2017 6:00:00 AM
This is a potent piece Darren. "Let me breathe again"... Am a lil speechless, fave dear xomo
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Darren White
Date: 10/1/2017 6:10:00 AM
Thanks for the fave, my fiend <3
Date: 9/30/2017 11:33:00 PM
First of all thanks for inspiring me to write more poems secondly your poem is excellent rhetorical devices have added beauty to your poem I am looking forward for more Views From you on my poems thank you again
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:39:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/30/2017 10:34:00 PM
All so beautiful! "Be my anger when I am kind"such interesting wording. Nicely done, Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I love wording things that way, glad you noticed :)
Date: 9/30/2017 8:04:00 PM
This was quite unique and I really enjoyed the notes at the end to help me understand your poem better. Well done, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, yeah, I figured I'd need some footnotes :)
Date: 9/30/2017 5:33:00 PM
I want to be releve-ed! This is very sexy.
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:24:00 PM
Hah, Dale, yes, I completely agree :)
Date: 9/30/2017 5:14:00 PM
Dance has the ability to express our deepest longings which include every single soul. Your poem reflects this with such surrender and beauty Darren! Thank you for including this very moving and inspirational video also. This poem too shall take its worthy place in my favorites. I simply love it! : )
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:24:00 PM
Yes, it has. It's very poewerful in expressing emotions.
Date: 9/30/2017 3:14:00 PM
Alive with the music...I might retire...the halls are empty here
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:23:00 PM
Come dance ;)
Date: 9/30/2017 1:59:00 PM
He was like a stream of tiny silken beads or a flock of larks I was mesmerized by the dance. I could feel my muscles ghostly memories of movement, freedom. Thank you Darren. Then your poem one of your best I think. I felt the yearning, the strain to make things alright, as they were. Straight to my treasure box to read forever.
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:23:00 PM
He is exactly that. You have described him well., and you elt that yearning too. Good :)
Date: 9/30/2017 1:28:00 PM
Beautiful, Darren, one of my favorite mediums the art of ballet. I watched the video, he is so limber just perfect with every move he makes and his emotions are just fabulous ...Hugs Eve ~`*
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Darren White
Date: 9/30/2017 11:22:00 PM
Thanks so very much Eve. Ohhh, isn't he wonderfuil?

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