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Restless Flames

Vast parade of inferno charms Hot savaged wavering flames' arms Roaring restless like jealous hound. Scintillating luster dance robs Human beings, buildings and crops... Blinding fervor burn, mess around Annihilating, sparing none! Embers blazing in scarlet stuns Swaying to crack, screams, sobbing sounds! (C) Olive Eloisa 11:34pm June 13,2014 Contest: Light A Flame Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Poetry Form: Novo Otto Third Place.. :D!

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James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2014 4:59:00 PM

Agitated flames soon to combust, flaming, not like metal, soon to rust. Love this piece Olive, James :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2014 1:52:00 AM

thanks much James.. :D

Silverla Stmichael

Date: 6/24/2014 3:06:00 PM

Powerful.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 4:51:00 PM

Thank you.. :) God bless you.. :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/22/2014 1:01:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win!!!! Beautifully written my friend!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Robert.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2014 6:26:00 PM

Yours has that dramatic flair that nette loves. I can see how you won with this one, sweetie. BIG congrats for your win. A great entry.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:23:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.. :) yours is great too. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/21/2014 5:55:00 AM

great one Olive ! congrats on a very wonderful deserved win !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:32:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma.. :D yours is great too I have read it.. :D

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/20/2014 6:28:00 PM

Liked this very much, Olive. Well deserved win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:29:00 AM

Thank you FAye.. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2014 3:10:00 PM

just dropping by with my congratulations! hugs jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:26:00 AM

thank you Jan.. :) hugs.. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2014 2:58:00 PM

emotional appeal and great flow of content-- check!.. cheers for the big win in my challenge, eloi.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:24:00 AM

Thank you Nette.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/20/2014 1:26:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!! Your Novo Otto is a truly deserving winner! This was a great theme to write about; and you were very much inspired:) (see earlier comments) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2014 4:22:00 AM

:) thank you Paul.. :) god bless you

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/20/2014 1:13:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Olive!!.. Incredible write!., hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Arlene..:)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/20/2014 12:04:00 PM

Olive, congrats on your win for this lovely poem. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/21/2014 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Mohan for the lovely comment..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2014 7:13:00 PM

OLive_eloi your determination to excel is praiseworthy. Wish most of my past students had been like you in class...willing, eager, learning with pleasure! Keep it up:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2014 9:51:00 AM

:) it's my pleasure to learn PAul.. :) it is not to excel but it is to grow... :) Thank you very much.. :)

Susan Palli

Date: 6/13/2014 2:49:00 PM

Could feel the fear! Good job

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/13/2014 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Susan for dropping by

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2014 10:05:00 AM

A fantastic, just fantastic with imagery and alliteration, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/13/2014 3:45:00 PM

thank you Sir.. GBU hope nothing like this will happen to us

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2014 9:24:00 AM

gosh, you are just going to town on these challenges, Olive. I really admire how you take them on!! Great imagery in your roaring flames!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/13/2014 3:35:00 PM

:O?! yes Andrea.. I only tried this one again.. :O!? this a product of my experience and my dealings with patients.. and the usual news we see on tv. :O thank you for the drop by..:) Hope none like this will happen to us

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2014 7:58:00 PM

Wow! way to burn up the page with intense words. awesome chicky!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/13/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Casarah for your intense comment.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/12/2014 6:56:00 PM

This is sizzling Olive...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/13/2014 2:52:00 PM

Thank you Tim for your sizzling comment.. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2014 5:47:00 PM

Fabulous imagery, stunning rhyme good luck in the contest. hugs as ever Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/13/2014 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Jan.. God bless you.. I wasn't actually inspired by this one rather I want to describe how it is when there is fire.. :( it's really frightening.. and ive seen one like this and been caring persons who suffered from burns..