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Restful Spirit

This restful spirit longs for love that measures inspiring pleasures that might come my restless spirit knows that it will not come ... Each day I wake looking for my sleep at night I sleep among my candles that I light before my rest of endless words ... Putting my feet on the floor I cry and cry for more my restless figure walks through the fire wanting a new world to come.... Brooke

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Weston Gregory

Date: 10/24/2022 7:52:00 PM

I longingly held a breath in anticipation, offered here sombre yet hope filled. Nicely done Brooke.

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/16/2014 8:47:00 PM

A most original and enchanting Poem you've contributed here. And I truly concur with Mike Clarke's Review. I really like how the emotions and thoughts are communicated here. Fantastic.

Vera Duggan

Date: 5/7/2014 7:45:00 PM

Hi Brooke what a lovely poem, I also am new to the site, I have been reading for a while an commenting as Peter is also on there but I have started to write, enjoy the site........Vera...............

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/6/2014 11:10:00 PM

Hello, Brooke! This will be my first time reading your work so I'll start with your first post on the soup. I must say that I really enjoyed every line, emotion and thoughts in this short but memorable piece. For some reason, after reading it, I could smell potpourri. Have a good day! :)

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/6/2014 11:22:00 PM

Thank you Jake.. so nice to meet you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2014 6:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Brooke

Paul Callus

Date: 5/5/2014 3:21:00 PM

Hi Brooke, I enjoyed this read; here you can venture into a new world where inspiration is certainly never lacking! // paul

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/5/2014 3:05:00 PM

welcome to the soup with this earth changing poem,,wonderful write,,,,read,,comment and enjoy Brooke

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2014 2:08:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Brooke :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Toil

Date: 5/5/2014 6:09:00 AM

Brooke, I am awe-struck by your poem. It is simply beautiful! Also, see SoupMail. Hugs;) Sam

Ayesha Karim

Date: 5/4/2014 9:11:00 PM

I loved your poem. You're a Poet. Please write more poems. I would like more poems from you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/29/2014 7:43:00 PM

Having a restless spirit is a prerequisite for being a poet. I expect we will see some inspired pieces. This is a great first offering.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/29/2014 7:41:00 PM

Welcome to the soup, based on the poems I have read of yours I can see you will fit in nicely. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my tears poem.

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2014 2:37:00 PM

Brooke, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/29/2014 5:03:00 AM

Hi Broke; This is a very well written poem. I know all about having a restless spirit. Thanks for your visit to my page and a warm welcome to Poetry Soup... Lucilla

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/10/2014 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla.. so nice to see you

Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/26/2014 8:32:00 PM

It seems we are always in search of something that will fill us up. 'wanting a new world to come'... great way to express anxiety and need to change :)

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/6/2014 11:43:00 PM

Thank you Karen so nice to meet you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2014 11:21:00 PM

Hi Brooke, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~

Brooke Dylan
Date: 4/25/2014 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Linda.. I will ...

Tim Smith

Date: 4/25/2014 8:22:00 PM

This is lovely Brooke..welcome to the soup....hugs Tim

Brooke Dylan
Date: 4/25/2014 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Tim... I already like it