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Rest In Pieces

The Grim Reaper called on the family; funeral arrangements will be finalized today. A somber procession of all the wrongs that tombstoned our relationship march past, one by one, casketing our “what God has joined together, let no one put asunder” years. Appalled bearers of the pain of separation, the children, grief-stricken, but tearless, gaze at us with bitter looks of betrayal, while becoming joint custody statistics. Ashen memories will repose in the urns of our minds until scattered by the winds of time. Perhaps we were so afraid of old age, we couldn’t conceive of growing old together – as if growing old apart would restore our youth.

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Date: 2/3/2022 9:28:00 PM
An original, creative take on relationship corrosion. "Appalled bearers" is a nifty take on pall bearers. And your final line is an unexpected but sharp insight on separation. In fact, the burial motif throughout is inspired poetry. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 11/11/2021 6:59:00 AM
at first, I thought this was full of cliches, I found it engaging, yes it's a classic but you turned the "cliches' on their ears and spun it to make its own animal. Yes, a loss of a relationship can seem like the death of a part of us, especially when children are in the mix. Separation can be a death of love, but can resurrection come too?
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