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Respect Your Goddess

Men! Huge percent treat women bad what the hell is our issue somehow this make us feel glad making them use a tissue? Discern nothing nice to say revel in our unkind role what makes us act in this way don't we care about their soul? We should not be talking down to someone we say we love instead fitting with a crown arrived on wings of a dove Respect them with all our heart let them know they are our world simple plan, but it's a start their wings becoming unfurled They should not ever feel ties to someone keeping them down pains me when a woman cries even when she wears a frown Treat them as a fragile kit be their protective armor everyday show them we're smit with comfort and our ardor But what bothers me the most lack of attention some give on cruise control we do coast should leak from us like a sieve How does one not notice her Aphrodite by one's side others should be but a blurr yet her face one wants to hide? INCORRIGIBLE - to me this thought of concealed beauty there are others who DO see and feel it as their duty Willing to bow at her feet giving notice whence deserved unabashed - not rude - just sweet the heart of their soul she's verved Keep playing those silly games they'll finish by losing her watch as her desire wanes and moves to someone else, sir!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/9/2017 5:04:00 PM
Very impressive and wise words to live by. I think there are a lot of people who could learn from you.
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Date: 1/30/2017 10:55:00 PM
Wow wow what an appealing heartwarming appreciation of us the women reminding men to treat us as flowers yeah. U wrote it in engaging creative rhyming and your words are simply awesome. Each stanza noteworthy. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.
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Keith Osborne
Date: 2/5/2017 7:50:00 AM
I am a little floored by your wonderful comments. This was the third written for a certain muse that is ignored a lot. Bothers me when a woman is not cherished the way she was intended. I know that I'm not perfect, but I try, at least. Too many of us take the ladies in our lives for granted. Thank you so much for reading. I will try to find some time soon to read some of your work.

Book: Shattered Sighs