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Resignation Leaves

Resignation leaves. Then inside his room he grieves sitting on a little chair wearing just his underwear. Resistance says, “No way! Never will I go away.” He is like a bloody hound so stubbornly he stays around! Resignation throws his hands in the air, makes no demands. See him give a little shrug. Someone give that guy a hug! Resistance has great staying power - from sun-up till the midnight hour. He’s water at a constant boil, the “squeaking wheel” that gets the oil! Resignation’s sure to quit. Inside his chair he sits and sits. Resistance, the annoying critter! He at least is no quitter! Written October 5, 2016 For the Resignation Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron Now revised for Skat's the 'Premiere Contest NUMBER 15' Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/12/2016 4:16:00 PM
Awesome imagery and expression!! Congrats Andrea, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/11/2016 7:13:00 PM
This is a good comparison of these two things. Great personification and well written. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 10/11/2016 12:30:00 PM
Sounds like Hillary. Is there anything - according to her - she isn't? Love, daver
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Date: 10/10/2016 3:02:00 AM
Black and white settling into gray. Very clever and good Andrea. ; ) 7
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Date: 10/9/2016 7:12:00 AM
A nice piece as always... goodluck with the contest.
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Date: 10/8/2016 9:01:00 AM
What a joy to read. I've got a smile. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/7/2016 5:48:00 PM
Andrea, very good and best of luck in the contest
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Date: 10/7/2016 2:39:00 PM
Love the rhyme and the rhythm. Love the two words you choose to counter each other.
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:27:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, the format and the rhyme scheme were well executed and fun to read.
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Date: 10/7/2016 7:51:00 AM
These are very cool manifestations, the squeaky wheel definitively worth that slick shot of attention.
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Date: 10/6/2016 9:12:00 PM
This really good Andrea. I've never seen this style from you and I like it.
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful write, Andrea :-) Hugs Eve
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