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Requiem To the Flower

That flower never seemed to grow Planted in hard dry soil, In crowded roots of isolation, Watered with careless expectations. That flower never seemed to bloom, Weighed down by pressure and criticisms. Impeccable flaws all in a loom weaved into the strains with disappointment. That flower was suppose to be beautiful, Suppose to be the apple of envy’s eyes, Discriminated by the less beauty Overshadowed, now in  a blight. Scarred by our own vanity, That flower was suppose to grow and bloom beautifully . But it soon died under the same sun That gave it life. http://allpoetry.com/poem/11671621-Requiem-to-the-Flower-by-Lala-Merx

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Date: 9/26/2014 7:15:00 AM
Dry hard soil is a not a great way to grow anything from a plant to a person..Enjoyed reading this unique work today..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2014 6:44:00 AM
this for me reading extremely beautiful
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Date: 9/25/2014 4:05:00 AM
how beautiful... roots of isolation, i love it... A nice write Dear poet... Hugs Malik
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Lala Merx
Date: 9/25/2014 4:06:00 AM
Thank you very much xx Lala
Date: 9/24/2014 10:53:00 AM
Very nice free verses! Have a lovely day! xxxxx D.
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Lala Merx
Date: 9/25/2014 4:07:00 AM
Thank you :) YOu have a great day too :) xx Lala

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