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In 2001, when I decided to leave my marriage of 12 years, and made friends with my then boss... I shared poetry with him. He was going through a hard decision making process and a divorce and I tried to show him my coping mechanism. He was astounded. We shared writing back and forth and it brought us close. We were never lovers, but we were good friends and shared thoughts and emotional things on a deep level.

Somewhere in the exchange with this friend... the poetry just started to "flow" from me. It would come out in perfect rhyme, complete thoughts with no editing. As if my subconscious self had just spouted. I had gotten into true right brain flow. It is really powerful incidentally. I wrote "Path of contemplation" and "Trust" in such a state. Trust was written in live chat with DrDave. I think I blew a fuse in his brain. LOL

Now I don't think my poetry is the bee's knees for artistic achievement. But I have been told by many an admirer that what I say, and the way I say it connects very deeply for them. It has great meaning. I honestly didn't know if what I said was "any good."

So how do you write poetry? Just do it... Eventually you will get to the meat of the subject, I assure you. And when you do, you might find your inner thoughts and feelings waiting there to be discovered.

OH! one last thing.... The requiem was about the sale and death of a company.... I wanted to put that into some context for anyone that took it too literally.

Context is another topic for the blog though... something I need to think about.

( written for Gemi and Sally )

- Artimus  (reprint from over in blogs, I wanted to post the Poem with some context. 

A requiem for an artist was painted on a man's mind This artist attempted to change the world to heal it from inside The man took the brunt of all of her messages of hope She sent them ostensibly to him to help him cope But really what the artist wanted was just to be heard To not be a blank portrait Overlooked, unheard The artist tried to heal the world to heal her own pain To push back the dark hold on to love, to resist being insane The man reflected he understood He showed that he heard that she cared The man was going through personal growth so some of the exchange scared The man now has the knowledge that the world is his to create The artist knows the two met as if an act of fate Perhaps the world will heal Perhaps it will continue on Perhaps the man and the artist are more closely drawn A man received the insightful rantings of an artist who paints the world. And because of this, another artist exists. Requiem for an Artist - Artimus 2/2001 (C) Susan Manley

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Date: 10/7/2023 4:08:00 PM
There are many ways one comes to poetry, Susan, yours was quite the interesting way. Glad you're here now. Looking forward to reading more of your thoughts through your poetry, my new friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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