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Representation

promised freedoms betrayed - poverty frolics amid laws…. changing…. Senryu per contest instructions…no capitilzation, commas, or periods © September 18, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:53:00 AM

Truth is always best, Dane Ann. Yours here is the truth that no one is willing to see. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:57:00 AM

this is so true at this moment in time, congrats to you with this winner.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:09:00 PM

Congratulations, Dane ann! LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 3:52:00 PM

Summed up the current situation so well Dane Ann. Many congratulations on your fine win >> James

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 3:02:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:38:00 PM

You must have entered this right after I left for Disneyworld, Dane Ann. Excellent statement about our country today!!! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Dane

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 1:09:00 PM

Hi Dane Ann :)-- coming back to say congrats on your win with this senryu :) nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 12:07:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in the Senryu contest... an awesome victory my friend.. enjoy today with luv...

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:34:00 AM

good one, congrats on your win in the contest

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/19/2010 9:19:00 AM

Hi Dane Ann :) this sure holds so true even in my own country-- so sad really how this seems to happen everywhere-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 10:04:00 AM

Hello Dane, lots of deep thoughts here. Enjoyed your poem. Have yourself a wonderful day,..p.d.