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Renvyle

Her look begged a thousand begs, Such that i could not reach Her as she trawled the stoney beach, For ragged drowned things, Such that i could not hear Her cold water screech.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 6:38:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life Johnny. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:03:00 PM
hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did
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Johnny Kiely
Date: 4/28/2012 6:43:00 AM
thanks dude!
Date: 4/26/2012 11:41:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Johnny, like your poem alot - well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Johnny Kiely
Date: 4/26/2012 12:02:00 PM
thank you!!
Date: 4/25/2012 9:37:00 PM
Very interesting, "cold water screech". I like that line.
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