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Rental

I wish I had the video of all your mental pictures so I could see what that night looked like, where he touched you and why you let him in… I want to watch the whole damn thing, shades drawn, sitting on the couch with only a box of Kleenex – I heard the ending is a real tear-jerker. Knowing me, I’d watch it over and over and pause at the exact moment you said yes, trying to read the eyes that now tell me nothing.

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Date: 11/30/2008 1:18:00 PM
You are a terrific poet, Tracy. Well deserved to be featured where more people can read what a talented writer you are! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/29/2008 9:44:00 PM
Tracy - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/27/2008 6:38:00 AM
Great poem that's full of human emotion. Sets the scene tremendously. I'm sure many people can relate to this
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations Tracy, on "Rental" being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 10:25:00 AM
Wow Tracy. Your poetry is powerful and raw. Love it. Congrats on an awesome featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:39:00 AM
Tracy, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2008 11:36:00 PM
Tracy, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Nigel
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