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While walking this morning I met the renowned artist; Fall He had dressed the sidewalks and streets with his outstanding pieces of art Thrilled by the cold nights he appeared to be working hard Turning so many leaves into vibrant blossoms before letting them fall off Colors he chose were varied in shades Greens were changing into multiple tones of red Little speckles of auburn he had dusted at some of their tip ends On some he had carefully painted greenish yellow tinged veins For some he had chosen a gorgeous silky yellow Some were showing off their attractive peachy red glow A few were embellished with pigments of color purple Base was painted orange for some with a hint of blond marvel Numerous outstanding shades and outlines of brown he had displayed Trees were pulsating with golden red radiance he had spread He also had carefully used magenta and blue on some Making the prominent textures and outlines of the leaves evident Wind was blowing hard making amusing sound Playing chase with the crunchy leaves Fall had scattered on the ground As usual Mother Nature had me in awe showing her yet another character She managed to bring a huge smile to me while describing her arty nature

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Date: 10/16/2019 8:47:00 AM
Beautiful poem for a beautiful season! Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/17/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words Matthew!
Date: 10/15/2019 7:40:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. I love the creative theme to this with Autumn as the artist working for Mother Nature. I loved this.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/15/2019 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Chris! It's the result of the exceptionally gorgeous fall colors :)
Date: 10/14/2019 11:27:00 AM
I always portray Fall as a woman, so it's interesting to see your poem showing Fall as a "He" Great colorful imagery here, Smita, as well as personification.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/14/2019 2:09:00 PM
I know Andrea! When the poem came to me I was surprised too that I was calling Fall a "He". It just fit perfectly. Thanks for visiting and commenting!
Date: 10/14/2019 11:22:00 AM
You are the Artist, Smita! Painting with your adept brush the charm of Autumn! Choose a most expensive diction to render the unique colours of so fascinating a Fall! How inspiring Nature is! How perceptive is your sensitive and poetic feel is to offer your reader a wonderful read! A great pleasure to see your painting! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/14/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Besma! So sweet of you to describe my painting of Autumn in your beautiful words! You are right, Nature has so much power to inspire us!!
Date: 10/13/2019 5:42:00 AM
This is a gorgeous personification and Mother Nature sure did gift you with this beautiful poem! I love it :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/13/2019 11:46:00 AM
Very true Heidi! Thank you for visiting!
Date: 10/13/2019 12:11:00 AM
So vividly descriptive and lovely, Smita. Yes, fall is a fantastic "artist." Janice
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/13/2019 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 10/13/2019 12:10:00 AM
Painted the nature beautifully... Good one..
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/13/2019 11:44:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Jenish!
Date: 10/12/2019 6:37:00 PM
although i dislike the cold and death autumn brings, i will admit the artist paints a beautiful scene, almost as well as you painted this poem....it shines in its brilliance... nicely done! :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/12/2019 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Sandra!!
Date: 10/12/2019 6:47:00 AM
Splendid imagery...you adorned your poem in colors of autumn in lovely brush strokes..like a painting, Smita.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/12/2019 1:44:00 PM
It's the magic of autumn Vijay! Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 10/11/2019 5:48:00 PM
Mother Nature is surely a sublime artist. Some say life imitates art; with Nature, art imitates life! Nicely penned, Smita. Best wishes, Gershon
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/11/2019 5:54:00 PM
Thank you for visiting and your comments Gershon!

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