Renovation

The old house whispers Return me to yesteryear Reveal my Secrets

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2014 1:14:00 PM

so many stories from a house being rebuilt.. this is finely-crafted, judy.. wow.. huggs

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/16/2014 7:53:00 PM

Nice Senryu Judy... Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/9/2014 12:59:00 PM

These three short lines can give us all so much to think about . We all see a different house and probably different ways to restore them. As for secrets we could fantasize all day. Brilliant Senryu Judy.

Judy Konos
Date: 9/9/2014 1:04:00 PM

Thank You!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2014 12:23:00 PM

how cool. I love the title you gave it too!

Judy Konos
Date: 9/9/2014 1:05:00 PM

Hey Girl...thanks and congrats on all your many wins! Go Andrea!!!

Keith Merritt

Date: 9/6/2014 11:00:00 PM

I find this especially appropriate for the coming fall and Halloween. Old houses whisper their stories...If we could just listen ! The future comes full circle... a very good Senryu, Judy !

Judy Konos
Date: 9/9/2014 1:06:00 PM

Keith...Thanks a bunch and a half!

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/6/2014 3:45:00 PM

Nice renovation to remember the past. Beautiful poem. Loved always,my friend,bl

Judy Konos
Date: 9/9/2014 1:07:00 PM

Bl appreciate it....thanks

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 3:15:00 PM

Your wonderful poem speaks to me Judy - i am sure a house does have many secrets but they will never be revealed:-) great write. Hugs Jan xxx

Judy Konos
Date: 9/9/2014 1:07:00 PM

Thanks Jan....take care and keep on chugging girl!