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Renewed

A lifeless cloud, aloft invisible air; Blows Eastward, a destination fate had prepared. Renewed, is a bludgeouned heart, no longer fueld by loneliness and despair... The demise of a mountainous boulder, crashing downward with it's mighty weight; Crushing ageless fossils, broken from a lifetime of decay. Renewed, is a love, Worthy of replacing, all the years of self hate. The hardened soil lying beneath, has now become darkened clouds, of a roaring, crushing debris; A lifelike sustanance, as it's path now creates; A Renewed desire to live, as it buries a lifetime, of turmoil and grief... replacing so much agony , with a Renewed, sense of relief... A lifeless cloud, now filled with the goodness of rain; While the burden of weight from life's Boulders, are replaced with fields of golden grain... Rising from the ruins, of the hardened soil of a soul; There lies a clearer path to travel, covered in a beautiful crystal sand. Renewed, is a life; Now replacing the death, I had once planned...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/29/2012 8:17:00 AM
Bravo Terry, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 8/26/2012 8:38:00 PM
TERRY, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 10:02:00 AM
congrats Terry...nice poem. Keep up the good work :) **Mary**
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Date: 8/1/2012 5:25:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Terry. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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