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I look pleadingly into their apathetic eyes as they pull out the last of my fingernails - The pain is excruciating and I pass out amid my heartrending screams. When I come to I am engulfed in total darkness. I find myself lying it appears in my own blood, sweat and filth. I try looking around but could see nothing; I touch gingerly and find my eyes swollen shut, My nose punched into a bloody pulp, My lips torn open and all my teeth knocked out. Jesus, where am I, What have they done to me, What do they want of me, I know nothing I am just a regular Joe struggling to raise a family, Hoping to live the American dream; What would I know of the Jihadi cell or the terrorist network? I begin to quiver in sheer fright - Oh God, did they bring me here just because my name is M U H A M M A D?!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/19/2015 7:06:00 PM
ABDUL:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 12/16/2015 7:09:00 AM
Greetings Abdul. Congrats for having your verse featured in the poetrysoup homepage! ;-)
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Date: 11/15/2012 2:42:00 PM
One would pray this isn't happening yet being realiztic it probably is ..in various forms all over the world, in order for there tto be a victor there needs to be a victim? horrid horrid Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/14/2012 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment" contest Abdul. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul! hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:40:00 PM
Great write. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:31:00 AM
Good morning, Abdul :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced " contest, deep subject... always~ PD
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:46:00 PM
CONGRATS ABDUL ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 11/10/2012 10:43:00 AM
omg thats scary........Seren
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:50:00 PM
It's scary to think of the racism like that. Very good poem.
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