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Rendezvous On A Star

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Rendezvous On A Star

Let me carry you to a waiting star,
With this kiss on your lips, we’ll reach that far
Leave behind all that encumbers your soul
On pristine whiteness with me take a stroll

Hold my hand as I lead you to a place
Where you ‘ll be blanketed in love’s embrace
There is no echo and no living sound
As you and I tumble down to the ground

This rendezvous star is for you and me
There’s no one else our love making to see
We sprinkle stardust as we toss and turn
Temperatures rise as the star starts to burn

The small earth is millions of miles away…
On this throbbing star, forever…please  stay…

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 5:43:00 PM
    Very sexy, I think that star will go super Nova with all that added heat!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 3/11/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Or maybe just become a shooting star that never burns up....Thanks for the visit!
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:58:00 PM
    you are the queen of the romantic poem! very very nice...

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 3/9/2013 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    By the way...both you and this other person are dear to my heart! Thank you for this lovely Title! I cherish it! :)
    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 3/9/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, my dear! How fantastic someone else called me a Queen today! I feel special! :) Hugs!