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Reminiscing

I reminisce, I miss the way we used to kiss; but now she's turned to ice. Ah well it was so nice... *this form is rhyme - as the rules said it was free form (any form accepted), but the site will only permit free verse... written 1st April for James' I reminisce contest

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Date: 4/27/2021 1:12:00 AM
Must be the change of season, Jack! I like your 'natural' rhyming. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/14/2021 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jack! Very Humors. Eve
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Date: 4/13/2021 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/10/2021 8:39:00 AM
Hi Jack, You penned a short and concise well-written entry for the contest. The tide can most definitely change. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/9/2021 2:42:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2021 1:10:00 PM
Creative and a beautiful flow of words. Well penned Jack and good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:07:00 AM
Nicely done Jack. A wistful feel to it.\ Good job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/1/2021 6:41:00 PM
Easy come easy go ~ lovely flow and rhythm, Jack
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Date: 4/1/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Jack. Bless you both.
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