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Reminiscence

I am here again You are not Birds you fed, await River, you held my hand on its bank, is still Stone, you carved our names on it, stares Tree, we sat beneath, showers heat Cloud is a burning sheet My sweat is cold Breath on hold I tremble like a leaf Adrift like a deaf My tongue stammer Senses lost manner I have exhausted each hope In climbing a broken Rope Days couldn’t last They went so fast This fleeting moment asks I am here again why you are not?

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/19/2016 6:27:00 AM

Your work's imagery is great and vivid.... Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 5/21/2016 1:20:00 AM

Thanks mate. I am glad you liked it. It will surely motivate me to do better work. :) hugs

Abdiel Rios

Date: 5/18/2016 9:28:00 AM

Great imagery

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 5/21/2016 1:21:00 AM

Thanks Abdiel. :)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 4/29/2016 6:48:00 AM

Touching verses and feelings. Touching colored leaves in their flight in the air.Undecided season of hope. Wonderful verses of sad recollections and new hope that should grow like grass in our heart.

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 5/21/2016 3:41:00 AM

Great hope ovidiu :) growing hope like a grass :) very well said. Let the rain showers on the desert which is forever deprived of a drop of water...!!!

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 5/21/2016 1:24:00 AM

Great hope ovidiu :) growing hope like a grass :) very well said. Let the rain showers on the desert which is forever deprived of a drop of water...!!!

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/23/2016 12:11:00 PM

Hi Sharaj, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 4/23/2016 9:39:00 PM

Thanks Manmath. Glad you liked it. Pleasure to meet you friend...Hugs :)

Skat A

Date: 4/23/2016 9:56:00 AM

Hi Sharaj, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 4/23/2016 9:37:00 PM

Hello SKAT, Thanks a lot for kind words and warm welcome. I am glad to be part of Poetry Soup. I am sure that we are going to be great friends and will learn a lot from each other. Thanks again for your comment. looking forward *Hugs.!! Sharaj :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2016 3:39:00 AM

Sharaj, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 4/23/2016 9:50:00 PM

Thanks you very much Linda. I feel lucky to join this community. I am sure that I will learn and improve my writing with help of your criticism which I am very much open to take. My pleasure being here. Best...Sharaj :)

Moon Flower

Date: 4/23/2016 1:25:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sharaj. :)

Sharaj Panwar
Date: 4/23/2016 1:54:00 AM

Thank you Moon for appreciating my work and for the first comment :)