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Reminders

Candle lights go out in a blow to set off the party event in a go, knife in hand I slice the icing, all faces around turn on their grin, the flow of red cream in slow motion seemed to dance to a song in commotion, the dainty bite that I took in let my heart speak out from within; Birthdays are Reminders to Thank LIFE for all it offers, Birthdays are Reminders to offer LIFE one’s Prayers.

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Date: 3/14/2023 8:07:00 AM
This is good poem, Sathya. They are reminders to be thankful, especially the older one gets.
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Sathya Babu
Date: 3/15/2023 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Daniel

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