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Remembrence

REMEMBRANCE Tamil abuses she gave Frisbee we played Tone she gave Love she made Remembered Nick name she take Eye lids she flashed Long chats we trshed Misses we cashed. Remembered Coffee we sipped Jokes i tipped Food we skipped Truth we lipped. Remembered Clothes we shared Hits i sapared **** we dared Regrets became rare. Remembered All become remembrance Going in vain When no one to share.

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Shirley Long

Date: 1/29/2012 3:49:00 PM

This is a good poem about things being remembered by someone you share things with and then they are gone.

Saurabh Gupta
Date: 1/29/2012 7:06:00 PM

yes it do relish memories........thanks for your comments ....Shirley

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2012 1:23:00 PM

Lovely done - well written Saurabh.- oxox love Anne-Lise

Saurabh Gupta
Date: 1/29/2012 7:04:00 PM

thanks a ton .....Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 12:43:00 PM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading yours Saurabh. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Saurabh Gupta
Date: 1/29/2012 7:05:00 PM

thanks Carol for your appreciation and such huge motivation...........

John Rhinem

Date: 1/29/2012 11:46:00 AM

Smile ˜ See these eyes sooo gray, I can stare for a thousand years * Don't you know my name, sweeet love, in a loves parade ˜ My love, Always, John!:) *

Date: 1/29/2012 11:54:00 AM

...Touch me baby * Can't You seee that I Am not afraid ˜

Saurabh Gupta
Date: 1/29/2012 11:52:00 AM

thanks John......i am touched...only soupers can feel those feelings.............