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Remembrance of Me

The mirror is deceptive. Not in what I see, but in what I see in me, In the remembrance of what I Used to be.. Is this my true smile the grin on this face has been some how misplaced Altered by the changes in this world I have made.. Behind this mask myself I do ask where have I misplaced the person who used to live inside this soul I wait at night for the dark to surround me For the night to smoother and suffocate me. My mind runs like a child and sleep I never gain.. So now my secret is told.. During the day why I’m happy all the time, Its not because it is me, Its because I choose to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/3/2013 6:29:00 PM
Its like you went on my mind and put it down in words! So talented!
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Date: 12/3/2012 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Rachelle. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:16:00 PM
Thanks you so much! :)
Date: 11/27/2012 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Rachelle! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:15:00 PM
thanks you so much! :)
Date: 11/27/2012 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Rachelle xx
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:03:00 PM
Thanks you so much! :)
Date: 11/26/2012 9:42:00 PM
Rachelle,. Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:03:00 PM
Thanks you so much! great experience :)
Date: 11/18/2012 12:52:00 PM
Pretty earnest!
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:16:00 PM
thanks you :)

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