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Rows of black with vivid splash of red, heads bow down at the tolling of the bell lined up like granite stones that mark the dead, a silent testament to those who fell. Thoughts and hearts together march in time, back to those muddy trenches filled with rain, one's soul lashed by the whip of every chime, one's freedom doing penance for their pain. With faces set, inside we give a cry as bugle cuts the silence for the lost, for answer to the simple question why peace always comes at such a dreadful cost. The war to end all wars, no lesson learned as through the Middle East the fires burn

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Date: 6/10/2017 6:17:00 PM
Truly, an exceptional sonnet that was a great pleasure to read and marvel at the depth, imagery and sadness revealed in war's hellish furies my friend! Super 10 from me and a new fav...
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Date: 6/11/2017 1:29:00 AM
Thanks, Robert, you're very kind. Hope you and yours are well. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/11/2016 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful Viv. Today is Veteran's here.
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Date: 11/10/2016 12:26:00 AM
a moving tribute. We have much to be thankful for. Thanks to the brave men and women who's sacrifice so much.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/10/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thanks Richard. We must not let them fade into obscurity. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/9/2016 10:36:00 AM
Gave me chills Viv, we seldom think about the huge sacrifices made in freedom's name.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/9/2016 11:03:00 PM
Indeed, paloma. I shall be there in my Market Square this Sunday as usual, for the two minute silence and the sounding of 'The Last Post'. Viv x
Date: 11/9/2016 5:01:00 AM
Surges of spontaneous emotions very well expressed in a nice sonnet ... we can appreciatively relate to ...
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