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Remembrance

Sounds of silence Fill my ears. As I shed My sorrowed tears. People pass Hug me and say "We are sorry It ended this way. My mind then travels To when you were here. To a time when Our love was so dear. Places we visited Words that were said, All seem to drift Thru my head. No more will I see Your eyes of blue, No more will you whisper "I love you." Why it happened I do not know. It's going to be hard To let you go. The memories we made Will remain in my heart. Even though We had to part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/2/2010 3:48:00 PM
Dear Laura, This is beautiful, sad and also very good, well-written poem. You've made me cry...Love can be painful but it is also sooo beautiful!! Great job!
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:21:00 PM
So heartbreaking. Congratulations on your featured write and so sorry once again for your loss. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 12:00:00 PM
A heartfelt poem of loss, great wording.
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Date: 8/25/2008 11:41:00 AM
The rhyme works well to forward your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/25/2008 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your sad but wonderfully written poem my heart goes out to you! Laura
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Date: 8/25/2008 6:42:00 AM
Touching poem. Congratulations Laura on "Remembrance" being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 8:54:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute - Very heart warming and heartbreaking - congrats on being featured - God Bless
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