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Remembering Romance

Your white Monroe dress blew out my car door, leading lonely brows to trace the cold floor Your timid teeth hid in tight luscious lips I knew I had to end your smile eclipse! a Quiet corner collected our thoughts Slowly words started undoing love knots Hearts whole in harmony and void of bleeds Lifelong wants then became desperate needs Soft tones held my name in your amber mouth Heaven’s rainbows shone when your eyes left south The sun broke through when your voice birthed my name My life was never ever quite the same! Our two lost lonely halves now reconciled We could see our love grow into our child -first date-

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Date: 5/30/2017 7:00:00 PM
I absolutely adore the sonnet form! And you my friend have done justice to it with this lovely entry, JJ! Well done
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Date: 5/31/2017 8:11:00 AM
You must be my twin!, OI also adore the sonnet format, thanks for your kind words."WW"
Date: 5/24/2017 2:24:00 PM
This brought out in me a pretty audible sigh.. what a wonderful description of that first date! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Juli-Michelle
Date: 5/24/2017 10:06:00 AM
A sexy romance that was ;) So romantic Mr. James :)
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Date: 5/24/2017 2:42:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it Akkina!

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