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Remember Used Glass

I picture the room we spoke in Surely, empty now as the night has crawled in The floors having been stepped on so many times By the foreign feet of humanity I picture the carpet, clean and florescent, The leaves designed to intertwine with the other The wall, welcoming with neutral fall colors, With glory-based pictures, big and small I remember the glass too well, My hands pressed upon one down the hall, As unwanted tears began to fall, Shortly after we had spoken I remember the empty room in front of me, Just before the hall began, How I wish I could hide in the darkness, Crawl on the comfortable couch, And sleep away the sadness I remember the happy faces all around, The glasses of water, cooling us on the blazing day And the used cups, pushed to the right side, Often mistaken for clean… No, but you… You were never mistaken, The moment you spoke to me, it was clear, I would be thrown to the side, Clean, yes, though not clean enough Do you remember how refreshing it was? To drink me in with your special surroundings, With the jovial faces and the welcoming walls Your eyes never knowing those empty halls The halls in which I will remember forever… Do you remember? Setting a glass aside, adjusting your suit jacket, Clearing your dry throat Messing with your tie, Breathing steadily, And blinking… Before you decided to set me down, Discarding me like glass when drained…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/6/2015 6:34:00 PM
We hope that we come out of the dishwasher clean and ready for a fresh drink! Funny that this is striking you now after some time has gone by. The brain is a filing cabinet, and sometimes things that happen to us open up old files. It is just one of those weird things. Dawn dishwashing liquid is pretty good, BTW.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2015 7:03:00 PM
I love your comments....<3 ~Laura 8)
Date: 9/6/2015 1:18:00 PM
Well written, my friend. It's his loss. You're destined for greatness...and for someone better. big hugs!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2015 5:04:00 PM
Aw, Kim.. thank you sweetheart! ~Laura
Date: 9/5/2015 1:56:00 AM
There is an emotional maturity that fills this cup of melancholy poetry Laura. It hurts to feel your calm, wise sorrow, yet I also feel your strength and fresh, fighting beauty. I don't want to remember you, I want to keep knowing you, loving you...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/5/2015 2:47:00 AM
Thank you for noticing the strength and fight in me, dear. I hope to always have you around - you are a person that I would never want to forget, who can never be forgotten. <3 Your words have a way of lifting my soul, leaving a special print on my heart.. ~Laura
Date: 9/3/2015 9:34:00 PM
Laura, WOW, this is breathtaking, I was fascinated with each word and was quite swept away, wonderful writing and thanks for visiting my poem, Justice for Cecil . . .
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/3/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thanks... I really liked your poem for Cecil the Lion.. thank you for taking the time to read a few of my pieces. I appreciate your feedback! ~Laura
Date: 9/3/2015 1:16:00 PM
at times we often ponder as to what we could have done right but everything happens for a reason be strong
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/3/2015 6:04:00 PM
Thank you PD. I needed these words... will be trying to take your advice :)~Laura

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