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Remember the Day

Do you remember childhood ways flipping pebbles through crested waves. Your innocence not a thought of mind just a child enjoying time. Bobby Jo my best freind wanted the day to never end. For young in years he could foresee this was the best it was ever going to be. So don't let childhood wonder fade away remember the day. The day on weathered sands an ice cream dripping through sand castled hands. Mum and Dad looking on hankerchieved heads when now a sarong. Don't let those days leave your soul for they won't come back those days of old.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/23/2008 7:17:00 PM
Childhood is something every human being longs for and the memories never die!!Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/22/2008 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2008 6:21:00 PM
Sometimes remembering is good for the soul and you've captured that beautifully here, Ann. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week!!
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Date: 10/21/2008 1:44:00 PM
Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Nice message in your last stanza. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2008 9:26:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem - congratulations on having it featured this week - god Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:33:00 PM
Good advice. Those were the wonder days for sure. Congratulations Ann on your beautiful poem being featured this week. Love, Shar
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