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The storms are lifting now, where once the auburn horizons clashed with dark, where mother led her children to drink, where father broke the moistened dirt, where I spoke of the bent little days; there are no storms that we can touch, nor the candle beside our bed; there are no monsters that I am aware, I only know there could have been.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2013 5:59:00 PM
Hi, I like what I read, ~SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:58:00 AM
Collin, :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD
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Date: 1/13/2013 2:36:00 PM
This write screams for more lines a fuller tale, I hope you will add to it. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:57:00 AM
Collin congrats on your HM....David
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Date: 1/13/2013 4:31:00 AM
Congrats on your HM Colin xx
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Date: 1/12/2013 7:11:00 AM
Well penned Collin! The awareness of how things are, and how things could have been, and how things could indeed become is what serves as a guide to human beings in this whirlwind world. Very nicely done!
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