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Remember Me

Remember me, As soon as I leave When you see my shadow disappears Swallowed by the dark Leaving no single sillage Remember me, When your day is incomplete And if you feel lonely Think of my voice and my name Softly cherish every memory Remember me, 'til you find someone again To replace my vacancy To fulfill the emptiness And make you feel loved once more Remember me, As long as you can do And as you love someone new Give yourself to him And you can now forget me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/2/2016 9:41:00 AM
Such a truly beautiful write, Hans, it kinda breaks my heart reading it as I am a romantic heart, hehe! 7:)
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:16:00 AM
I love the unique structure if your poem... Congrats Hansteven, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:18:00 AM
Hansteven, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:32:00 AM
Certainly, it may be sung. Like a magic sound with good reverberations reminding me of Anton Webern`s Passacaglia. Congrat.
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