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blue forget-me-not brilliant beautiful bloom always on my mind 23rd March 2015

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Date: 4/1/2015 10:17:00 PM
Pretty poem. With a touch of alliteration. V.B Rogers
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Date: 4/2/2015 2:21:00 AM
Thanks Val I love the alliteration here:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 1:35:00 AM
lovely haiku sweet Jan.. :) love the pic// olive eloisa
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Olive:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/25/2015 12:49:00 PM
Another amazing haiku, when are you putting together your book with all your haiku, tanka, all your Japanese and small writes? A Fav!
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Date: 3/25/2015 12:52:00 PM
You flatter me my friend - I don't think they are good enough for a book lol - my project will be to turn Lenny the Lizard into a book - dedicated to Darren as it was his 3 words in an e mail that inspired the write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 11:24:00 AM
I love blue and I love your poem my very dear friend Jan! Great haiku, indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Leonora:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 8:24:00 AM
Love this one dear sis! Huggsies, Jack xxx
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 8:04:00 AM
A clever title and poem Jan.
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Date: 3/24/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2015 12:23:00 AM
this is enchanting, Jan. I am thinking hyphens on forget-me-not, to show it is the flower! wonder if it is written that way or not!
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:14:00 AM
I will check and amend it Andrea - a write close to my heart for so many reasons:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/23/2015 8:23:00 PM
Spring is around the corner here in Oregon, Yay! Thank you :)
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:13:00 AM
It is here on the Isle of Man:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/23/2015 7:36:00 PM
OH OH OH OH!!!!!!!! Jan, how precious and sweet! LOVE the pic. I collect heart pics. Lovely haiku. I don't write haiku....I used to, but it's a difficult form. Senryu more my style, but you pulled this one off with class. Welcome back, Hon. Hugs
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:12:00 AM
Thanks Eileen:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/23/2015 3:16:00 PM
Lovely. Hugs ~jan =)
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Date: 3/23/2015 4:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Janet:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/23/2015 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful Haku Jan, you have truely mastered this form. Glad you are back. love Shane xxx.:-) a 7 and favourite for me.
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Date: 3/23/2015 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Shane:-) Hugs Jan xx

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