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Remedy Caught In Her Bones

The night was young, thick floral aromas, flooding my nose. It didn't distract me from thought -like I'd hope This strong shame shelling over the rendered heart pulsing behind my flesh. As i walked down curbs and crossed over ***** streets I was distend to find something else. Maybe the darkness shedding from my eyes, hauled out all the glare, from the moon, shinning over my head. I though I'd blame the sun, not being able to fill the absence, of the light I needed. Troubled, Obscene and groggy at best, but my feet kept moving. Walking to a place, I haven't found yet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 12:03:00 AM
Keep asking and youll find Jamie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 10/24/2008 10:29:00 PM
thick floral aromas, flooding my nose. very thought provoking- great job. Thanks for your comments too!
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:12:00 AM
Jamie this is very deep in reflection - You certainly have a wonderful way of expression - God Bless
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