Rem Dreams

REM dreams rerun the Saturday morning Flash Gordons of my sub-conscience on the backs of my eyelids. The battle between good and evil, Flash versus Ming the Magnificent, continues unabated in the waking world, so I might as well go back to sleep.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 9:27:00 PM

i meant the REM fall... lol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 9:26:00 PM

I like the dream, Jack... and i don't blame you for wanting to go back to sleep.. . Enjoyed, your haiku. Thank you for liking my featured poem. By the way I was going to ask you if you are from Texas... :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA""

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/13/2013 10:37:00 PM

Thanks for the comment. These days I don't know whether I'm a Texan or an Okie or a Texokie... Jack

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/11/2013 8:38:00 AM

'Flash Gordons of my sub-conscience on the backs of my eyelids'...Wow

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/11/2013 9:15:00 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting... Jack