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Relieve My Heart of Its Ache

These trembling lips cannot bear to remain mute when their quivering begins in my deepest root Surf upon the wave's crest of a stimulating ride, Enter my secluded orchard upon a flowing tide Saunter into my arbor and taste my honeyed fruit Allow each nibble to entice with unbridled pursuit Warm yourself in the sun as we sensually collide Ripen with me until temptation is languidly descried Inhale the fragrance of my skin on fleshly curves Embrace the throbbing titillation of tingling nerves Unshackle your heart, and have it not be denied Caress every part of me as your fingertips glide Hold my blossoms as they call to your heartstrings Drink deeply of my nectar; flit your pinioned wings Pluck me for your pleasure, with hands that shake I await your touch; to relieve my heart of its ache

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 11/1/2020 3:39:00 PM

'Tis the essence of captivating sensuality. Beautifully crafted, Lin Lang. Hugs, Paul

Lin Lane
Date: 10/1/2022 4:56:00 AM

Thank you, Paul.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/8/2019 8:07:00 PM

Hello Lin Lang, this is a great poem. A lot of us would like our heartache to be relieved. That takes time to heal. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2022 5:01:00 AM

Hello Ling Lang, You are welcome Lin. Hugs.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/1/2022 4:55:00 AM

It does and thank you, Darlene.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/11/2018 9:30:00 AM

Amazing writing Lin, wow!! Funny I've been working on a write titled My heart aches when I think of you, great minds? Well yours at least!!lol Take care HAGD!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2018 7:59:00 PM

You and I are of like minds on many important facets of life, John. Thank you for liking this write, snd I look forward to reading your new post.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/7/2018 6:18:00 PM

Very beautifully sensual and intricate, Lin ... I love the layers and ambiguity as well, rife with metaphor amd luscious imagery. Excellent write, going into my favs.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 8:02:00 PM

Thanks, Greg. I appreciate the generous detailed remarks and marking it as a fav.

Bobby May

Date: 12/7/2018 3:49:00 PM

Lin, if I were just a 100 years younger your poetry would have sweep me off my feet but I am to old for someone with the way your heart beats. Your way with words amaze me they blend together so well, you have become the water that fills my empty well. Great Job, Lin Thanks for being my new peep!! I forgot what I said last time, lol

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 5:59:00 PM

lol Bobby. I don't care what you said last time because what you've just written must be a lot better. Seriously, I thank you for the accolades, no matter your age, I welcome them.

John Gondolf

Date: 12/7/2018 1:46:00 PM

Wow, Lin, what a beautiful sensual poem. I can feel the wanton emotions oozing from you pen. Thank you for sharing it. All the best. John

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 3:16:00 PM

To feel my written words is the most rewarding form of praise. Thanks so much, John.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/7/2018 1:05:00 PM

You my dear friend, you are without any doubt in my mind, heart and poet's soul, truly a wondrous poet's poet! Such beauty, depth, passion, sensuality in verse can only come from one blessed as to be so richly endowed with the gift of creating magnificent poetry! This examples humbles me when I think of my own writings. Yet we each cobble the shoes as best as we can my dear friend.. A fav-- a true and most worthy gem!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 3:11:00 PM

Robert, your kind words are taken to my heart and greatly appreciated. I feel unworthy of such praise, and humbled to accept it. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/7/2018 12:53:00 PM

Wow Lin, your passionate heart is revealing in this spectacular sensual piece! I love the metaphors so eloquently written. Thank you for making my morning! This absolute beauty of a poem is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 3:08:00 PM

I'm so pleased you like it, Connie. Thanks so much for the read and great remarks!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2018 12:10:00 PM

Oh so sensual my friend just remember about eve eating that Apple and the snake lurking to tempt her! Seriously a fabulous pen lin:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 12/11/2018 9:32:00 AM

Great response Lin, even your comments are poetic!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 12:25:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. My garden recognizes a snake when it attempts to slither near. Bitter is the juice from my lemon that finds its way upon his tongue.

Chris Green

Date: 12/7/2018 9:12:00 AM

Such a dream like stroll I have just been on through an orchard bearing delicious fruit and deep desires. I may hang out in this poem for a while if you don't mind Lin. This was beautiful and really touched my heart. If only you knew how much this touched me this morning. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2018 9:28:00 AM

This orchard invites all who wish to taste the sweetened fruits of love. The more who enter - the more ripe becomes the fruit. Thank you for asking me to post more often, Chris, and the reward for me is that it touched your heart.