Relief

Hot sand on the soles Skipping toward the shoreline To waves of relief

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/29/2015 11:03:00 AM

I can 'feel' this haiku, Michael; it appeals to the senses; love the end line. Top marks for you #7. // paul

Md Johnson
Date: 6/9/2015 11:09:00 AM

Top marks from you is flattering. Thank you for reading.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/23/2015 1:39:00 AM

I can feel that. Immensely beautiful Haiku. There is something so relieving from dry hot to wet coolness... Adored this one. Reminds me of summer days long ago. Always, Laura

Md Johnson
Date: 5/24/2015 4:25:00 PM

Your thoughtful comments are very much appreciated.

Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 11:33:00 AM

Michael, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT*

Md Johnson
Date: 5/14/2015 10:10:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comment. Happy you enjoyed.

Rochelle Harris

Date: 5/1/2015 1:47:00 PM

Michael, I live on the beautiful gulf coast therefore imagining this is very easy for me. Thanks for the cool and refreshing image(: ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

Md Johnson
Date: 5/1/2015 2:01:00 PM

Yes, making your way to the waves can hurt so good :-)