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Releasing Tension

Sorry dear, I've noticed you accidentally broke another finger nail, as you raced for the last fresh lettuce at the Chinese grocery. I know what you can do to forget all that happened! Go the beach, and feel the breeze and taste of the ocean on your tongue. Better still, you can eat seaweed- they have oceans' salt, and still taste like the ocean. You can also take a glass of a 19th century old Venice wine, instead of drinking coffee in the cafes of Berlin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/28/2016 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations Teddy, on your screwed Xll win. Linda
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:27:00 AM
An excellent write Teddy, The words just flow in one stream from start to finish. This is how i release tension, going to the water, the air seems different in itself. The calmness i feel is incredible. A well written piece that deserves a seven Teddy....Vlad.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/19/2016 7:28:00 PM
Hi Vlad. Thank you for your comment and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 1/13/2016 8:05:00 AM
No one can forget the past surely. Am i wrong? Beautiful poem penned beautifully. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/17/2016 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much BL! ;-)
Date: 1/8/2016 8:48:00 PM
This is very creative and beautiful , great write my friend ,hugs / / :) dalia
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/10/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thank you very much for enjoying my poem Dalia! ;-)
Date: 1/8/2016 4:51:00 AM
Teddy, intriguing but I soon figure out after two reads.. =`) like it!! I enjoyed the read!~Olive ELoisa =`)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/8/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Olive! *^_^* <3
Date: 1/8/2016 12:04:00 AM
NICE POEM, CHEERS!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/8/2016 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Yunyan! ;-)
Date: 1/7/2016 4:51:00 AM
excellent write Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/7/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much White Sage! ;-)

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